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Tonight things will be said
Things that should have been dead
The past will mix with the present
And I will need to vent

Emotions are heavy
Everything is out in the open
The water breaks the levy
This is the way this has to end

Chorus
This is the end of what we had
The end of something great
The end of the good outweighing the bad
I guess this was our fate
The end

We told each other we would be friends until the end
The end must have come sooner than thought
But do not worry my friend
There must have been a lesson taught

Lessons are hard to learn
One day I will understand
How the tide had to turn
Or if this was planned

This is the end of what we had
And the beginning of what is to come
The end of the good outweighing the bad
And start of feeling numb
The end

Lies, deceit
Our trust in each other disappears
Let's start over and not repeat
After all these years

Our bond should have held
I guess I was wrong
When I yelled
I should have seen us not holding on long

This is the end of what we had
The start of something fresh
The end of the good outweighing the bad
Maybe this is for the best
The end

This.....Is.....The.....End......
Ok.....I want to say this up front..... This piece was not written about anyone in particular.....It just came into my head while listening to a really good band called Dead Poetic... Their song "New Medicines" got me thinking about new beginnings with new people and losing the people you thought you would have by your side forever.....So, that's how this song generated.... I like this piece a lot.... Tell me what you guys think of it!
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tleach0608 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
This is another good song, I feel sadness and bitterness which is usually what happens when two people don't make it. Excellently done! =)
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emokid07 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! I'm really glad you like the piece! This is one of my favorite pieces...and will probably be a dramatic slow-ish piece....
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vermilion--vermouth Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2009
I'd love to hear music for this.
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emokid07 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
You will be able too... but sadly... it won't be for a while... I have a band... but we haven't had any time to do anything... mainly because we live in different states.... and only one maybe two of us have our instruments at this point... so we are a band in progress... but as soon as we get something done... i will totally put a journal up on here saying that we have something done and to check out our Myspace page to hear it!
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vermilion--vermouth Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2009
Okay! ^^ Good luck with the band!
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emokid07 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :D
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vermilion--vermouth Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2009
You're welcome. :)
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emokid07 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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Tomatogrower Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
You Have Been Featured Here :aww:
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emokid07 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much!
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