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Don't lay there in despair
Blood ridden lives still to spare
Days go by and still I cry
How much harder do you want me to try

As you try to escape
Don't run away from your fate
Life can be so rough
So let's not hate

*Chorus*
Life is so precious
Don't you see
What you are doing to me
As I try to flee

As the blood has drained
The life she has gained
From my selfless pity
She is so pretty

I'd give it all away
Just to spend another day in your arms again
Will you lead me a stray
For personal gain

~Chorus~

As days go by
We all eventually die
Rot away
And decay

So until then my friends
I will see you when life ends
Or everything just decays
In a firey blaze

~Chorus~
©2008-2009 ~emokid07
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I really love the first verse.....everything else just seems not as strong from that point on....but it's cool.....I've been on a lyric writing spree lately....I think I have written three of them in the past week....That's a record for me....I usually write one every now and then....but not as often....Yay!
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~emokid07:iconemokid07: Apr 15, 2008, 11:32:52 AM
thank you very much!

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"And if my lungs still let me breathe
Would you be there for me?
If I can make myself believe,
I'll give you back what you took away."

Smashed Into Pieces~ Silverstein
~jade369:iconjade369: Apr 15, 2008, 1:31:49 PM
lovely!! I like the way it flows

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Life is a novel waiting to be expressed creatively..........
~emokid07:iconemokid07: Apr 15, 2008, 5:25:07 PM
Thank you very much!

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"And if my lungs still let me breathe
Would you be there for me?
If I can make myself believe,
I'll give you back what you took away."

Smashed Into Pieces~ Silverstein
~crazyemosrock:iconcrazyemosrock: Apr 15, 2008, 6:29:18 PM
GOOD: very nicely composed
BAD: but not your piano piece, six weeks exams until saturday

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"You know, when we say 'For Pete's sake' we mean Pete Wentz"-Me!!
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~emokid07:iconemokid07: Apr 15, 2008, 6:31:09 PM
Alright that's cool....no worries.....we have stuff to work on so no rush.....I'm just really happy you were soooo willing to work on the piano piece for me! Thanks again!

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"And if my lungs still let me breathe
Would you be there for me?
If I can make myself believe,
I'll give you back what you took away."

Smashed Into Pieces~ Silverstein
~crazyemosrock:iconcrazyemosrock: Apr 15, 2008, 6:50:12 PM
no worries?!
it's already taking forever cuz my friend borrowed my sheet music and doesn't live near me
and the backbeat with the left hand...........totally hate it
but you are welcome!!!!!!!

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Billy Costigan Jr. II!!!!
"You know, when we say 'For Pete's sake' we mean Pete Wentz"-Me!!
Myspace Link [link]
[link]
Fanfiction account!-Missy-Chan
~emokid07:iconemokid07: Apr 15, 2008, 6:52:31 PM
Ok....well i guess if you want to worry? lol.....why do you hate the backbeat with the left hand?

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"And if my lungs still let me breathe
Would you be there for me?
If I can make myself believe,
I'll give you back what you took away."

Smashed Into Pieces~ Silverstein
~crazyemosrock:iconcrazyemosrock: Apr 15, 2008, 6:54:51 PM
because it's so hard to get it to flow with the right hand
don't worry though (....what am i saying?!) i'll get it

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Billy Costigan Jr. II!!!!
"You know, when we say 'For Pete's sake' we mean Pete Wentz"-Me!!
Myspace Link [link]
[link]
Fanfiction account!-Missy-Chan
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